POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

View previous topic View next topic Go down

POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by The Masked Man on Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:34 pm

I warned you I might do this.


Last edited by The Masked Man on Tue May 15, 2012 1:02 am; edited 10 times in total
avatar
The Masked Man

Posts : 63
Join date : 2012-04-24

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by The Masked Man on Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:03 pm

Removed


Last edited by The Masked Man on Tue May 15, 2012 12:59 am; edited 7 times in total
avatar
The Masked Man

Posts : 63
Join date : 2012-04-24

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by Rust on Thu Apr 26, 2012 10:15 pm

The Brooklyn Haiku is brilliant xD

Other notable favorites of mine are April 21st and 25th

I also can't guess what the 23rd is about =<

All in all, this is some pretty good stuff, my friend.
avatar
Rust

Posts : 308
Join date : 2009-05-22
Age : 28
Location : Florida

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by BSmith on Thu Apr 26, 2012 10:18 pm

23rd would be a play on "the grass is always greener," would it not? This time referring to how we view things in the past as the "good ol' days" when in reality, they weren't always.

_________________
Amano: When did you do that?
Smithy: note the first post is March 31?
Amano: See, this is why I'm not a detective.
avatar
BSmith

Posts : 300
Join date : 2009-05-21
Age : 27
Location : New England

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by The Masked Man on Thu Apr 26, 2012 10:42 pm

You got it, Smith. When I wrote that one, I was trying to get myself to stop reminiscing and focus on what needed to be done at that time.
avatar
The Masked Man

Posts : 63
Join date : 2012-04-24

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by Nissadex on Thu Apr 26, 2012 11:39 pm

Oh my goodness, these are gorgeous. I'm stunned-- as an art form I've always respected Haiku but I've never ventured too deeply. I absolutely LOVE these. They're.... beyond gorgeous.

_________________
Did you cut your hands on me?
Are my edges sharp? Am I a pest to feed?

Rock, Paper, Sinner.
avatar
Nissadex

Posts : 169
Join date : 2009-05-22
Age : 23
Location : Pittsburgh, PA

http://rockpapersinner.tumblr.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by BSmith on Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:02 am

So, like, when you finish the year... you need to publish this.

_________________
Amano: When did you do that?
Smithy: note the first post is March 31?
Amano: See, this is why I'm not a detective.
avatar
BSmith

Posts : 300
Join date : 2009-05-21
Age : 27
Location : New England

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by The Masked Man on Sat Apr 28, 2012 12:44 pm

I'd love to. Getting paid for my writing is a dream of mine, but I suppose it depends on how many people want a book of haiku. I've also heard that getting "into" the publishing biz is a bit of a chore.
avatar
The Masked Man

Posts : 63
Join date : 2012-04-24

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by The Masked Man on Tue May 01, 2012 8:58 pm

Removed


Last edited by The Masked Man on Tue May 15, 2012 1:00 am; edited 4 times in total
avatar
The Masked Man

Posts : 63
Join date : 2012-04-24

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by Rust on Tue May 01, 2012 9:01 pm

I especially like the little stories you post with each haiku, it seems to give them a larger meaning imo. It's how I see it, anyway.

avatar
Rust

Posts : 308
Join date : 2009-05-22
Age : 28
Location : Florida

Back to top Go down

Re: POETRY REMOVED- REQUEST THREAD DELETION

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum